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The Rain

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The Rain

You look at me, but you don't see
    the way I feel inside
I try to breathe; I'm struggling.
    There's no place I can hide.
I tried to run, but I'm confined
    to fake my way through life.

I'll take the shot; I'll end it all
    unless someone comes to

Take me out of the rain
    Before I fall into the dark
Take me out of the rain
    As I lay here, falling apart
Take me out of the rain
    Don't leave me here alone
Take me out of the rain
    All I want is to go home

I walk the halls with my head down.
    No one would understand.
I'm all alone; I'll ask for help
    and get a reprimand.
"You'll be okay, It's just a phase."
    "Why won't you shut your mouth?"

I'll tie the noose; I'll go away
    unless there's someone to

Take me out of the rain
    Before I fall into the dark
Take me out of the rain
    As I lay here, falling apart
Take me out of the rain
    Don't leave me here alone
Take me out of the rain
    All I want is to go home

I'm breaking inside; in my own mind
    I can't deny the way I feel.
With nowhere to hide, I try to fly.
    I can't deny that this is real.
I live through the pain, suffering.
Someone just make it STOP!

______and

Take me out of the rain
    Before I fall into the dark
Take me out of the rain
    As I lay here, falling apart
Take me out of the rain
    Don't leave me here alone
Take me out of the rain
    All I want is to go home

Please

Take me out of the rain
    Before I fall into the dark
Take me out of the rain
    As I lay here, falling apart
Take me out of the rain
    Don't leave me here alone
Take me out of the rain
    All I want is to go home

Take me out of the rain
    Before I fall into the dark
Take me out of the rain
    As I lay here, falling apart
Take me out of the rain
    Don't leave me here alone
Take me out of the rain
    All I want is to go home
A song I came up with today at school.  The chorus popped into my head at the end of first block and then I wrote it during second and third.

This isn't how i personally feel, but i can imagine a lot of people can relate to this song.

The last time through the chorus would be a lot quieter than the rest of the song, with little or no instrumental background.
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